Wednesday, September 28, 2005

obliquity

love whispers dangerously across
my pedestrial mind
until the curtain falls

God exposed as light
light in form of service
service crucified

the following day
i eat before hunger
close my eyes at pain

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Blogger Bardejov said...

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11:51 PM  
Blogger Bardejov said...

You really are excellent at capturing beauty and joy with your words, but I feel that your descriptions of pain or sadness need work.

It could be that I'm just not used to hearing a poem with this tone from you.

11:53 PM  

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