Wednesday, September 28, 2005

september 28, 2005

this morning was warmed by
a basket of sunrise

we unwrapped the shades
made tea in the shadows
of plants, hands raised

1 Comments:

Blogger Bardejov said...

I think for once, this could use a little more...but just a little, maybe one more line?

The ending is asking, not telling.

9:16 PM  

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