Thursday, October 27, 2005

for a young man's turning

i closed my eyes and spit seeds
to find roots in broken soil

but my blindness turned the sun
to shadow my indifference

earthworms have found their way
as angels thunder dimension

2 Comments:

Blogger Bardejov said...

This poem is masterful. The rhythmn is harnessed to its utmost, and though your poem is small, its fiber , like a collapsed star, is heavier than a thousand planets.

I completely relate to your poem.

Sign,
Earthworm Zdenko

12:06 AM  
Blogger human_progress_landscape said...

Has a young man turned away from his blog? Where are you Q? I miss you!

5:09 PM  

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